Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Teenage drinking & driving problem essay

Issue: Teenage drinking & driving



As one of the crucial and weighty issue, the teenage drinking and driving has grabbed my attention for the essay. Each year, approximately 5,000 young people under the age of 21 die as a result of underage drinking; this includes about 1,900 deaths from motor vehicle crashes, 1,600 as a result of homicides, 300 from suicide, as well as hundreds from other injuries such as falls, burns, and drowning. I believe that there is nothing more serious than losing a life, of a beloved son, daughter, friends, and/or cousins. To start off, why is it so harmful for teenagers to drink? People aged 18 to 24 were expected to drink excessive quantity, which is usually more than six standard drinks for men or more than four for women at one occasion. People in that same age group experienced critical amount in harm from their drinking. (NZHerald) Teenagers lack in controlling how much they drink, also there are peer pressures which cannot be ignored. From a personal experience, I witnessed a boy being called ‘lame’ because he was not drunk or ‘passed out’ at a party. What’s more, the researchers found out that Teenage years are for swift growth and also a vital time for physical and emotional changes. Furthermore even though the research in this area is in its early development, it does put forward that teenage drinking may cause physiological damage, even if taken for a short time. (guardian). The occurrence of binge drinking in teenagers is a noticeable distress for anyone.

 Now going deeper into the topic, teenagers are making false judgement after drinking and jumping into driving vehicles. Taking too much alcohol over-boosts their confident which causes them to hop in to a car and drive as if they are the best driver in the world. In one of the articles I found and bookmarked, it mentions that teenage drivers are getting drunk and deciding to drive a vehicle in an alarmingly increasing numbers than ever before. Moreover, the customary alcohol breath tests in Auckland area shows that the number of intoxicated drivers under 20 has increased by 77 per cent compared with two or three years ago. (NZHerald) Julie Elliotte, a student from SADD (students against driving drunk) was horror-struck when this figure was announced. Although the legal limit of a 20 or under age group for alcohol is 150mcg, a police stopped a 19 year old girl near South Auckland with her breath alcohol level of 1000mcg. This was recent. On another article it is arguing that they should come up with a stronger law. It also mentions “Alcohol Healthwatch says police reports of a 77 percent increase in teenage drink-driving shows our alcohol laws need a major overhaul.” They counted 2227 young drivers at the Auckland checkpoint alcohol group at the checkpoint and that they are just waiting for an accident to happen. Not only the law but they mention something else should be done. The teenage drinking problem has changed significantly compared to the past. According to an article from New Zealand Herald, On December 7, 1984, Crowds of teenagers had gone mad on Queen Street in central Auckland, rioting and prowling and leaving a stunned nation question what was happening to civilization. (NZHerald) Most of them were heavily drunk youngsters and that a few were even old enough to identify the differences between what is right and wrong.






Personally I think the drinking age should be raised also adults needs to lead them as an example and accept that if they want their teenagers to behave securely and sensibly with alcohol they have to change their attitudes to alcohol, young ones grow up watching their parents. Parents are like their role model, so I believe this is a good long term solution. However, in one of the articles I spotted a not so great news, “One in three parents do not talk to their children about the dangers of alcohol, making underage drinking the "forgotten factor" threatening young people's safety, according to new research published today.” It makes no sense because adults, especially parents feel that they should talk to their youngsters about the severity of alcohol but in actual fact, not a lot of parents are putting this on action. To add more, the video I posted with the essay will be referred to what will be mentioned now. In the video, they declare words like "In less than four years, I'll start going to parties where I'll be drinking alcohol," Plus, another girl announces that before she turns 15 she will be drinking at a party and a boy will pressure her for sex. This is not all, a boy calmly speaks that he will soon be at his first gig, and we assume he would be drinking by watching the whole campaign, where he will then be given drugs by an older boy. This is a campaign run by ad agency Wieden & Kennedy London, to warn the parents that if they do not take any actions such as talking to them about it now, their children will turn out not how they wanted them to be. "Children as young as 13 are often already drinking at parties and coming across some grown up decisions," said Paul Jordan and Angus Macadam, creative directors at W&K. "This campaign is a reminder that good decision are harder to make when you have been drinking." (Guardian) Also it is smart to keep in mind that instead of stigmatizing alcohol and trying to scare people into abstinence, we need to recognize that it is not alcohol itself but rather the abuse of alcohol that is the problem. Additionally, police officers should do a though check on teenagers’ facebook pages where they allow users to hide their indiscretions such as drinking pictures.



16 comments:

  1. you have got an introduction under way i see

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  2. Oh no I have 784 words on the microsoft words, I just like writing on microsoft words before I post it up because microsoft spell checks and everything for me. :) Everything is under control!

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  3. You're as good as a reporter! lol i really "enjoyed" reading it because it's just so true! What else can police really do? Parents are responsible for what happens to their kids if they don't even talk to them about the dangers of drinking! Well done for the introduction, point of view, articles!

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  4. Thank you, Melba :) I agree, it is really the adults' job to guide them the right way and if the teenagers are still going the wrong way, then I guess there is really no way. Writing this blog made me learn a lot.

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  6. Whenever I hear on news that teenagers were involved in fatal road accidents, I just assume they were drunk. It's become so common. I think some parents are responsible but some are hopeless. Wasn't there a grandma jailed for her third drink driving offence and killing someone?
    Great blog! And yes, I have voted.

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  7. Yes, I agree with you. I automatically think that if a teenager commits a crime, that they were drunk. Thank you for your vote, Akiko :)

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  8. Hey YonHee, great topic! And beacause teenage drinking, has been a popular issue in current news, I disagree with the government trying to up the age of leaglly drinking to 20. This will encourage more teens to drink, however your information and statics about this has backed up your evidence really well! Awesome job. lol

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  9. I agree it mostly involves with a model of parent. They are not capable of thinking the consequences of their behaviors. I've been driving since i was 17 and back then, it was more like showing off to my friends :P (Now I hardly break the rules.) I like your report!! I enjoyed reading it.

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  10. Thank you Harri and Boyoung for your valuable comments, Harri: Yes I agree the teenagers will try to drink more but not all teenagers are rebellious and I was thinking by raising the age, the number of accidents could actually decrease. I didn't think it would keep every teenager from drinking, haha no way. Boyoung: I agree with you that the teenagers when they first get their license they are busy showing it off, I think 90% of people feels that way at that age ;) And good job for breaking no rules now haha
    Thank you guys.

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  11. I like your topic of debate and how you link in your personal experiences. You bring up a lot of valid points, supported by evidential links but this could be displayed in a more effective way rather than in brackets. There were also quite a few grammatical errors which could essentially distract the reader from your essay, but on the whole I enjoyed reading this (:

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  12. Today in our society, there are many teenagers will like to have alcohol drinks.After that, they will like to drive as well, that is why there are many accidents, car crash are happening.I think oure teenagers should be concern this problem.

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  13. Hey, great topic and essay!
    Really enjoyed reading it, I too agree that it's the parent's responsibility to teach their children to obey the laws of the land!

    But then again, if the teenager decides to move away from what their parents have taught them and drinks then drives, well that's their fault for being rebellious and thinking they're 'cool'. Next minute they find themselves in a hospital bed and their faces are all over the newspaper! Reminds me of that ad "If you drink then drive, you're a bloody criminal".

    Great essay! :)

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  14. As some how has worked in a bar i have seen irresponsible drinkers of all ages. The trouble i think is their is no evidence of the Responsible sales of alcohol act being enforced. Or education on safe consumption at home. drink driving is an issue however if the problem of drinking is addressed problem the should be solved.

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  15. Enjoyed reading your essay:) It is a great topic.
    Many of my friends started to drink alcohol quite early. And I think they had an influence most from their parents.
    I believe it will be the same even the government raise the drinking age. Teenagers will get the alcohol somehow.

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  16. Thank you Courtenay, Sammi, Samantha, D.L.W and Yewon for your comments. Yes I agree this is one of the serious issues going on nowadays and most of teenagers influence eachother, therefore start drinking. Sad but an actual facts.
    Thank you guys again. :)

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